Showing posts with label Jeremy Whitley. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Jeremy Whitley. Show all posts

Tuesday, September 26, 2023

The Unstoppable Wasp #1

From 2016, the character of Nadia Pym (later Van Dyne), was created to reflect the character Evangeline Lilly played in 2015's Ant-Man film. Why they don't instead call her Hope in this comic is beyond me. If you're going to mirror the movie universe, go all out and do it right. Or don't do it at all. If I had anything to say about this book, I wouldn't advised Marvel to just scrap it.

First of all, readers are supposed to forget nearly 50 years of comic book history. Instead of being killed by Communists, Hank Pym's original wife survived long enough to have a child. The child, a daughter, was raised by the Red Room, the same clandestine Soviet training center that created Black Widow and all of her 'sisters'. Now free from Russian/Soviet influences, Nadia makes her way to NYC and seeks to become a superhero like her famous father.

Oh, geez. I'm having trouble with this review. I've been frustrated with my fellow fans today about being so negative and anti-woke. I really like to think I'm a little more open minded. I like issue writer Jeremy Whitley. I've interviewed him before. I am a big fan of his Princeless world of books. I just didn't like this book. 

In reaction to SHIELD's lack of respect for women scientists, by book's end, Nadia creates a think tank that specializes in women and STEM studies in order to save the world. My culinary field is considered a career and technical education subject of study. My department strives to empower minorities and females in an industry that is dominated by men. So I am all for STEM and STEAM, as Culinary arts are a form of art. I just didn't like this issue!

This story just felt too saccharine for me. Maybe it's because Nadia is a millennial or a member of Gen Z. Maybe Nadia is just too positive and cheerful; like Santa Claus, at Disneyland... getting laid! Something about this issue just rubbed me the wrong way. 

I looked at some other reviews of this book, and I think I've put my finger on what was getting on my nerves. A lot of readers seem to have the same complaint. It's how she and her teen friends talk. If you thought Cher in Clueless was bad, you will hate the dialogue in this book! Maybe it's because I am in my 40s. I am sure my parents and grandparents hated how I talked. It's that generation thing, surely. Though I don't recall any of my high school students from my past 5 years of teaching ever talking like this. It's almost like how DC writers in the late 60s and 70s would be criticized over how these 'old fogeys' didn't understand how modern teens of the time talked. I like Jeremy Whitley. I just don't think he was ever around teens in the mid-2010s. 

A good story that is just a bit out of touch with today's youth. Maybe if the dialogue was more realistic and not in YEET-speak. Thank God my students don't talk like this. I don't think I could continue working with them if they did.

Rating: 4 out of 10 stars.

Friday, November 16, 2018

Hey Kids!- Learn How To Make Your Own Comic Book! (Family Comic Friday)

Welcome to an extra special edition of Family Comic Friday. This column is normally reserved for reviews. But not today! Last weekend, I attended the Bull City NC Comicon in Durham NC. I went to lots of panels including one tutorial on how kids can create their own comic books.


May Madeline, Greg Burnham, Marcus Williams (front L-R) Sarah Gaydos, Jeremy Whitley (back)



The panel consisted of 5 experts who have been working in the comic book industry. Their
job experience ranged from just a few months to several years. So I thought that this would
be a great opportunity for them to pass along some valuable tips on helping kids create their
very own comic book.


Panelists
Sarah Gaydos, Editorial Director of Licensed Publishing, Oni Press
Jeremy Whitley, Writer and Creator of Princeless
Marcus Williams, Artist and Co-Creator of Tuskegee Heirs
Greg Burnham, Writer and Co-Creator of Tuskegee Heirs
May Madeline, Teen Art Student, Artist of Rainbow Brite Variant Cover!


What is a Comic Book?


According to Sarah Gaydos, a comic book is a story told with words and pictures. But
does that mean that The Very Hungry Caterpillar is a comic book? “Typically not as comic
books are made with a paper cover and have staples in the spine. (The middle fold of a
comic book.)’ Sarah explains, ’Also, most comic books have more than one picture per
page usually.”


But don't some comics have hard covers? “ That's normally what we call a graphic novel,’
Sarah answered, 'Those type of comics tell a single story in one volume whereas a comic
book may go two or three or more issues in order to tell the story.” But don't worry if the
comic book you create is done in just one issue. “That's the fun in creating comic books,
you can do whatever you want with it!”


What Should I Do First? How Do I Write a Story?


Sometimes you just don’t have any ideas. So the panel recommends that you keep notes.
“Bring a pen and Notebook with you everywhere you go... Write your idea down.” Jeremy
Whitley says. “You might be at school and have a great idea but you don’t have time to do
anything about it. Write the idea down real quick so you don’t forget. Then later you can
come back to it.”

Putting Pen to Paper


Later when you have an idea, you star drawing. Greg Burnham advises all aspiring artists
to “Keep it up. Write or draw every day. Don't stop.” Greg also says that if you don’t have
an idea, keep drawing. “Draw everyday like. Draw yourself. Draw your family. A toy. Just
keep drawing.”


Marcus Williams, Greg’s writing partner on Tuskegee Airmen, also does character design
sketches. He says that when he’s drawing he will also write. “Develop your character.
Leonardo di Vinci. Do like he does. He would make sketches and then make little notes
(on the sketches) for later.”


Artists also have another important role in the design stage. Marcus explains “an artist
takes things in their own mind and use shapes, colors and designs and put it on paper.
That's an artist. His role is to draw every scene that is created by the writer. It's okay to
draw your own way.” An artist helps craft the world for the readers.


“Think about your entire world.’ Sarah says. “Think about the villains, gadgets, the towns.
You don't know if you are an artist or writer until you try.”


What Style of Art Should I Use?


15 year old May Madeline has a cartoony art style. She recommends that new artists be
open to anything.“Everyone has their own art style. You should always look at other art
styles. It can help you create your own style. Even if you draw cartoons, practice it
everyday to perfect your style.”


Marcus also likes the cartoon style. He says “It’s great as you can stretch and pill the
character into many different ways. But if you want to draw comics, study comic books
and the artists.”


“You can copy comic books. There's no comic police. Copy and dissect the art.” Sarah
chimed in. She points out that now as a kid, you can copy any comic book you want. But
when you get older and work for a publisher, then you might be limited by law as to who
you can put in your drawings. But for right now, “If you want to draw Batman with a
Smurf, Do It!’




My Art Doesn’t Look Right. Am I Not an Artist?


Sometimes you can draw your favorite character and it doesn’t look it should in the
comic book. That’s okay. Maybe it’s not the style for you. “Nobody has to tell you
you're an artist for you to be an artist.” Marcus says. The important thing is to try
and try and try.


What Should I Use To Draw?


May says that when starting out, “you don’t have to be fancy. you can use line paper
and pen, markers. Try different things. Markers, crayons. Pencils” Pencils are great
as they’ve got an eraser. But there’s some types of pens that can be erased as well.


What are some other things I can add to my comic?


Sarah went over several things kids can add to a comic book. First open are panels.
“Some comics have lots of panels. Some just have one.”


One of everybody’s favorite things to add to a comic book are sound effects.
“Experiment.’ Sarah says. ‘Sound effects. Create your own. Take the sound effects
and make it part of the art.”


Lastly is color. When you draw, you are typically use black and white. Greg says
“With your pen or pencil, use it in different strokes or designs to make shades.
Then use colors.” But which colors do I use? “Any colors!’ Greg exclaimed, “It’s your
book. Make it how you want it to look!”


How Can I Stay Focused?


Sarah, who is an editor at Oni Press, explains that an editor is like a teacher. They
keep the artist and writer on track. It’s my job to say on Friday that the job is due on
Monday. Then on Monday, I say ‘Okay guys, it’s Monday! Your projects are due
today!”


Some Activities


Drawing and writing are fun. But why not make it a little like real life. And why not do
it with a parent or guardian? Here are three fun activities that the family can do to
simulate the job of a comic book creator.


#1. Stay On Target.


In this activity, Mom or Dad come up with a story. They then give the child a deadline
like a week or a month. The adult also tells the child how many pages to make the
story. Then they act like an editor keeping the kiddo on task.


#2. Sound Off.


In this activity, Mom or Dad take a piece of paper and write a sound effect on it.
Then the child has to craft a picture of what if making that sound. For example- the
sound is ‘Pop!’ Maybe it’s a piece of popcorn popping. Or a little girl is yelling for her
daddy. Or maybe a car’s tire has gone flat. There’s tons of ideas here. You can even
have the child come up with 3 different pictures of the one sound effect.


#3 Reverse Mad Libs


In this final activity, a grown-up writes 10 words down in a list. These words can be
anything. Nouns, verbs, adjectives, proper names. Then the young writer is
challenged to craft a story with all the words. You can later make this game a little more
difficult by making the list 26 words long and each word is done in ABC order. For
example “Apple, Bring, Counting,...” The real fun is to use words that might have more
than one meaning, like ‘Duck.’ You might think they will write about a bird. But they might
have a character duck from a frisbee being thrown at them.


Remember with all of these activities, have fun. There’s no right or wrong. Well, as
long as you try! Not giving your dreams a chance- that’s always wrong. Because you
will never create 100% of the comic books that you don’t practice on.

This article was concurrently published on Outrightgeekery.com.

Tuesday, November 6, 2018

Hero Cats/Princeless #1 (HCF 2014)

I got this comic book at last year's Halloween ComicFest. But it's from 2014! I'm wondering if the store I went to found some leftover books in storage. Otherwise, the only other way I ended up with this book involves some sort of time warp.

There's two different stories in this book. It's not a crossover, despite the very cute cover. In the first story, a group of six cats with special powers, use their abilities to help a little girl who got lost during trick-or-treating. Then in the Princeless tale, the heroine and her friends run afoul of pirates... on land... in a steak house!

I thought the Hero Cats tale was just darling. All 6 characters are unique and funny. They interact how I imagine my furry babies. There's a mysterious and probably evil entity at the end of this story. It plays into the Hero Cats graphic novel and it will be on my radar for a forthcoming Family Comic Friday review.

Princeless was not quite what I was expecting. Creator and writer Jeremy Whitley lives in central NC, When he published his very first Princeless comic book, I meet him and got an autographed issue. I meant to read it and just never did. Then Princeless became the juggernaut and I've been afraid to read it since the book has skyrocketed in value. Regardless, for being a Halloween ComicFest freebie and the Halloween cover (and the Halloween theme of the Hero Cats adventure)- why wasn't the Princeless tale Halloween themed? 

Does the holiday not exist in the Princeless universe? Okay, I could buy that. But why wasn't this story at least spooky in some way involving a ghost or monster of the sort?

That first story was perfect. The second just wasn't scary in the least. Good art. Clever writing. Just not the right fit for a HCF free comic book.

Worth Consuming!

Rating: 7 out of 10 stars.

Friday, September 30, 2016

Princeless: Tales of Girls Who Rock! (Family Comic Friday)


Today's Family Comic Friday selection is a one-shot from a series that I know somewhat personally.

  The series is called Princeless and it's been hailed as the type of Princess story that Disney should have been telling all along. It's the story of an independent young woman named Adrienne. When she turns sixteen, her father locks her in a tower guarded by a dragon so that one day her Prince Charming will come and make her his bride. But Princess Adrienne craves adventure and along with the royal blacksmith’s half-dwarf daughter and the dragon, the three set out to free Adrienne's six other sisters held in towers their own of throughout the kingdom. Tales of Girls Who Rock! is a one-shot that focuses on some of the other fiercely independent young ladies that Princess Adrienne and here companions have crossed paths with in the past.

This one-shot is a fairly good starting point for new readers. You're not really expected to know much about the storyline beforehand and each short story is framed as independent from the various Princeless miniseries. However, some parts of these stories feels a little choppy to me, so I wonder if the book is like a primer full of condensed segments of the (so far) five or six miniseries under the Princeless banner.

    This is actually the first Princeless comic that I have ever read. But it's not my first experience with the series. Back in 2011 at a local comic book store, I actually meet not only series creator Jeremy Whitley, but the real life inspiration for Princess Adrienne, his then fiance-cum-wife, Alicia! I was just starting out the reading program charity at my wife's clinic and was so desperate for comics for girls that I bought six issues on the spot. Five went to the readers and one, which I got autographed, went into my collection.

 I had kinda forgot about Princeless for a while until about a year ago when I learned that the series had become a multiple award winner of the 2012 Glyph Awards for Story of the Year and Best Writer along with a couple of Eisner nods. A friend of mine also told me that my first issue, autographed and mint is probably worth a hundred bucks (ungraded), so I have left the book virtually untouched. So Princeless stayed shelved until I came across this book in a grab bag a few weeks ago.

   Don't make this mistake I did. Grab some issues or collected editions for the aspiring comic book collector in your family. A great series that girls and boys 7-14 will enjoy. But there is one thing parents should be aware of- the ads in the back of the book. There's at least 2 ads that tells of other comics published by Action Lab and not every title is appropriate for all ages like this one. The titles Molly Danger and NFL Rush Zone are kid friendly but you'll want to steer clear of the series Fracture and Jack Hammer until the middle or high school years.

  Worth Consuming.

  Rating: 9 out of 10 stars.