The entity that attacked Chief O'Brien in the Holosuites has been revealed. I'm happy to say that the culprit is NOT Redjac. I'm kinda slapping myself for not figuring out who it was ahead of time as the clues were right in front of me.
The truth about who killed the Captain on that Federation starship has also been revealed. I'm happy to say that it is NOT Jadzia Dax. There's no slapping myself in the head about this one because that culprit was first encountered in an episode of DS9 that I haven't seen. Hey, I was busy with college and being engaged during those last 3 seasons. But not having that knowledge kinda hurts my full appreciation of this aspect of the plot.
There's also a gigantic continuity error. Or 'nit' as fans call such mistakes. It involves that crew member who was attacked outside of the Holosuites. In the last issue O'Brien makes it clear that the crew member is dead. But at the beginning of this issue, he's revealed to be clinging to life. So far I am on board. O'Brien isn't a doctor and the pulse could have been way low. But then a couple of pages later, O'Brien, Worf and Dax are all shocked that this guy is dead. So was this a mistake made by the author of this story or were a couple of pages in my issue printed out of order? It kinda feels that way. But if that's the case, why isn't the correlating pages towards the back of the book out of order as well?
You might think that this is a minor issue to be confused about and to complain about. But the killer, was revealed at the exact same time that the crewman is found clinging to life. But when the crewman is now officially deceased, it's a big surprise about the killer. Everyone's like 'Who are you?' The same killer who introduced themselves just a few moments earlier!
Aaaaaaaagh! I hate it when this kind of stuff happens. I never know whether to blame my developing cognitive shortcomings or find the writing and editing teams at fault. Or maybe the printers really are responsible. Regardless, I did not enjoy this book as much as I could have. It's still a good story. But the quantity really did dip.
Rating: 6 out of 10 stars.

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